“Time Traveler”
Ask me
how many times I have started over--
how many endings I’ve seen.
It’s not magic
when it’s not a choice,
and reverse isn’t an option.
This is really short - too short, probably. Also, I've heard Back to the Future referenced several times recently, I think that means I'm supposed to watch it.
2 comments:
Can things written be too short? Sometime the less words the better, but what do I know? And good call on back to the future. I am amazed at how well it holds up. I think it may be that it doesn't say "Present Day" at the begining. So nothing seems too crazy (other than the whole time travel thing, and his mom trying to get him in the sack....)
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